tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10942485.post115729536995190592..comments2024-03-22T04:04:44.742-07:00Comments on A.R.Yngve's "Notes Towards Becoming A Better Writer": "Oh No! We've Got Homepage Update Sign!"A.R.Yngvehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03972668378286177600noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10942485.post-1157311289281656372006-09-03T12:21:00.000-07:002006-09-03T12:21:00.000-07:00I see your point. Now, I will probably add a few m...I see your point. <BR/><BR/>Now, I will probably add a few more "MSTed" installments -- it was so much fun sending up one's own stuff -- but in any case the original text is still available separately, without comments, for those who want to read the "real story":<BR/><BR/>http://yngve.bravehost.com/darcages00.html<BR/><BR/>An educational side-effect of MSTing your writings, is that you learn to recognize where the writing is weak. Weak style, bad grammar or a clumsy choice of words are extremely vulnerable to MSTing. :)A.R.Yngvehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972668378286177600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10942485.post-1157308191430749782006-09-03T11:29:00.000-07:002006-09-03T11:29:00.000-07:00Having read the short part you presented I must sa...Having read the short part you presented I must say I really liked the style. It's fun having a co-reader that makes the story comedic, but my concern is that it would easily turn from fun to enoying being used too much or for too long. Once you as a reader gets involved in the "real story" you want to be able to focus on it without some smartass commenting every second line.Kiss N Tellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05710433646178673231noreply@blogger.com